I found this metaphor to be a little ridiculous but exceptionally representative of the character. Throughout the commercial, the deaf girl was always told her limits. Her peers would not allow her to discover her true potential as a violinist. Once she met the deaf man who played the violin on the street corner, she was inspired to pursue her dream. By the end, she played the violin at the concert and received a standing ovation from the audience.
Although I found the comparison to be slightly cliche, I could see the connection well. I feel that the butterfly introduced the audience to the feeling of beauty, so shortly after it would be easier to recognize the beauty of her hair. The audience was already open to the idea of beauty. Also, the butterfly is the logo for Pantene. Once knowing the connection of the butterfly to Pantene, it became easier for me to recognize why it was included in the comercial.
I loved that you said that the butterfly introduced the idea of beauty which made the audience think of the hair being beautiful. I hadn't thought of that being a reason why the butterfly was shown!
ReplyDeleteYour writing here is a kind of reporting -- or what we might call TELLING. A more engaging kind of writing actually takes the reader to the moment of contact or conflict and SHOWS the reader how the writer felt. You might re-post this one with this advice in mind.
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